priorpeter
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Last line particularly needs work, it’s supposed to rhyme and isn’t the right pattern.Lucas Mauragis
He is a coastie hero,
He escaped Newcastle to play in blue and yellow,
5 foot 9,
Our left back,
He gets the coast excited,
Stick your jets up your arse ‘cos we’re the famous mariners.
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“Stick your newy up your arse, ‘cos we’re the f**kin champions” is the first thing that came to my head with better cadence but could also definitely be improved upon, last word still not rhyming.
He’s also 5 foot 11, which totally throws that line out of sync.
It’s a start, but a friendly hot tip for chants - if it doesn’t work, don’t try and force it. This feels very forced.
But hey, what would I know 🫠
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